Monday, May 23, 2016

Week 8



Good evening, class.  Hope you are doing well.  The quarter is quickly advancing (or so it seems to me) and our work will soon be finished.  Today I will return the graded final narrative drafts and any other paperwork you have submitted.  The plan is to review the field work assigned, the final draft work of your image-based research essay, allow for some readings and grammar review, and watch a film, or part of one, namely Boyhood (2014), directed by Richard Linklater, a coming-of-age story that was filmed over the course of 12 years as the characters themselves grew older.  The director began with a sketchy script and allowed the story to develop over time, getting everyone together once a year to shoot, and revising as events suggested, even to incorporating the real-life experiences of his cast, a thing not done before. The film may be used as the basis of your individual research paper.

You must begin researching the final project, which is to be 500-750 words in full MLA format (all sources documented).  I encourage you to focus on a fresh, timely subject (or make it fresh, show its currency) about which much information can readily be found, and that you have a personal stake in, by which I mean the subject really does matter to you.  Your writing will thus convey greater credibility.


Monday, May 16, 2016

Week 7








 

The man who has forgotten to be thankful has fallen asleep in life.”   
                                                                                           –Robert Louis Stevenson


 It is week seven.   Today you have due the finals of the narrative, and time to work on the final drafts of the short research piece submitted last week, the rough drafts of which I will return today. We have just five weeks to completion of the quarter.  Thus far you have been assigned a total of 3 essays, including rough drafts and the final drafts; these include the summary/response (1), the autobiographical narrative (2), and the short research essay with an image focus (#3).

The field report (4) is coming due soon, as will be a short research project (5), and lastly, the in-class final (6).  The in-class final is to be done in class week 10 or 11, not at home.  The field reports are described below (reposted from last week's page) and due week 9.

Essay 4 (due week 9, 500 words):  An EyeWitness/Field Report:  You must attend in person a local event, community function, business enterprise, entertainment venue, museum, restaurant or hotel establishment, nature preserve or park, area of historical interest, etcetera– in order to gather information from direct experience.  You cannot rely on the reports of others or the site's own published information alone.  The writing of the piece requires you bring to readers the vicarious experience of being there in person. themselves; that is, by engaging readers in your own experience on the ground.  Background research may help fill out and provide context for the report of course, and you are encouraged to find out as much as you can in the way of origins or history of the establishment, event or area for possible inclusion in the report.  



     Reviews and descriptions of cultural fare–of nature parks, historical attractions, art exhibits and fairs, live music shows, restaurants, bars, and clubs old and new, sporting events, lectures, book signings and discussions, community classes and workshops –serve to inform people of what's going on about town and provide them incentive to get out and experience some of what the area has to offer.     In this assignment you must report on a local place or local event from an eye-witness perspective–you must go there, experience whatever is on offer, and write about it in such a way that readers feel they have gotten to see and know the place through your first-hand experience of it.
     The particular focus and perspective you bring to your subject,   your knowledge and ideas and observations of it, and the degree of interest and engagement with the subject you show–these are central to the essay’s success.  Whether you are visiting a park, a beach, a museum, theater, restaurant,  yoga studio, even a cemetery (we have a delightful one nearby that is a birder's mecca), etcetera–descriptions of the scene or environs, the activity, the individual artworks, performances, ambiance, food, service, etcetera will bring the piece to life and convey a you-are-there sensation to readers.  Your readers will be relying on your knowledge, powers of observation and storytelling abilities.    Your informed judgment, taste, and opinions will be an important element.   approach you create, the thesis idea controlling and unifying the work, will make for certain selections and emphases that reflect you the observer, your history, interests, tastes, etc.  
    The eye-witness report is a species of primary research.  You may find you want background reading on whatever aspects of your subject require context, to fully develop your thesis or main ideas.  To repeat, this essay will require you actually go somewhere in person and record material facts and observations before putting the piece together.  Your thesis tells you what to include, to emphasize, and what to ignore.  The essay should run a minimum of 5oo-6oo words, including introductory, body, and closing paragraphs, and title.

          Remember the who, what, where, when, why roster of specifics.


    Read the following article about a favorite getaway destination of Swedes and as you do notice how the author includes specifics of place, his personal journey, and the cultural context of Gotland. This is the form you want to model, however near and familiar your focus destination.  You will be a personal guide to your readers, revealing a place in all its particular appeal:
   
      This assignment provides you opportunity to travel locally and write about the experience. In fact, the road trip form has a particular free and spontaneous quality to it that you may want to try or incorporate in part.   Look here at how the author begins his report/profile of Lynda Barry, a well-know cartoonist and storyteller, who teaches workshops targeted to non-writers or those who have almost given up:  http://www.nytimes.com/2011/10/30/magazine/cartoonist-lynda-barry-will-make-you-believe-in-yourself.html
   
     Field reporting often involves character sketches and narrative work.  The story element must be made stimulating for readers to feel transported. The story involves you and the featured subject of your work.


       Remember:  this is not to be a story about a trip or place visited some time in your past.  It is to be undertaken as an investigation of sorts with the writing in mind.  Take notes!  Your writing must be authenticated by particular observations drawn from the field.  Local subjects only:  Monroe, Collier, Dade, Broward, or Palm Beach county.

If you visit an exhibit,  include the museum or site name, location, and featured artist(s), including the exhibit’s run dates in your report. Focus would necessarily be on some theme observed in one or more works or overall.  You would identify representative works (by title) and present a verbal description–medium, size, subject, form, and color–so that readers can "see" the work and understand the conclusions you draw from it.  

If you visit a natural area, try to tie the visit in to some current news (a news "hook") or ongoing area of interest (natural history/studies, ecology, environmental justice, marine life, art) to create audience appeal, to lend purpose and weight to the piece.  

If you like to eat and drink, explore.  Food culture is of great interest to many these days and offers many choices for primary research or "eye-witness" reports–green markets, restaurants, bars, etcetera.

If you go to a museum the primary focus would be to see the various exhibits and selectively cover what you find most interesting.  The URL of the NSU Museum of Art on Las Olas:  http://nsuartmuseum.org  

In fact, there are several museums in the downtown area, including  The Old Ft. Lauderdale 

Historical Museum and another devoted to science and discovery.


     The field report (#4), 500-700 words, will be due week 9.  Those of you still to present an essay reading may do so then. 

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Essay 5 :  Short research report with MLA Works Cited list:  in 600 words or more report on a topic or issue with contemporary relevance about which you can find timely, authoritative primary and secondary source material, as in recently published news, scientific reports or articles, reviews, books,  films or photos, etcetera.  Title the piece and double-space the lines.  Include in-text references to source material and a Works Cited list arranged in alphabetical order.

Your thesis should be clear early in the paper and provide you a means of knowing what material to include and what not.  Ask yourself : Does this source or material contribute to "proving" or elaborating my point? If so, include it; if not, don't.  Know your purpose and the direction you want to take readers by final draft.  Initial stages may feel like so much groping in the dark and that's fine, but by the end you should have learned where you want to go and what you want to say in certain terms.

Due week 10.



Research Topics (only suggested)

1.  Environment, nature, conservation issues (think climate change, habitat loss, pollution, species "news", green trends).

2.   Technology.  New Products. Trends. An individual, corporation, or industry to watch, making a difference, positive or negative, perhaps something like Tesla, started by Elon Musk.

3.  The economy/ best ways to stretch a dollar, money management.

4.  Diet, nutrition, health.

5..  Great food ideas/new trends in culinary arts and/ or agricultural practice/ legal marijuana, etcetera.

6.  New media–new opportunities/new challenges:  Facebook, Twitter, Instagram.

7.  Culture review: fashion, film, art, celebrity life, sports, politics.

8.  Gender politics, reproductive rights, marriage and family today– whatever the issue.

Popular News and Editorial Sites: You are certainly not limited to the following sources, but they should provide ample means to do the work assigned.

npr.org

slate.com

huffingtonpost.com

truthdig.com

salon.com

theguardian.com

bloomberg.com

democracynow.org

nasa.gov

nytimes.com



I will look at whatever work you have in progress, time permitting.  

Again,  week 10 or 11 a  final essay of 450-500 words will assess key composition skills, including grammatical sentences, unified and well-developed paragraphs, support for your thesis, and sound use of references and direct quotation, if called for.  You will have a set of topics to choose from and perhaps a required reading.  The Internet may thus be a source of content.  This final must be done in class.

Monday, May 9, 2016

Week 6




Marilyn Monroe by artist Andy Warhol
                                        
Good day, class.  Hope you are well!  

Today I'll return the work on poetry you submitted last week and discuss the draft assigned 

of a short report (#3) that takes as its subject or trigger a visual artifact, one that is in the public realm.    

You may choose a photograph, drawing, painting, short film, cartoon, advertisement–one that offers 

itself to visual analysis along aesthetic lines, journalistic and/or commercial ones. Keep in mind, too, 

that many visuals include text in the form of captions, thought or dialogue bubbles, signage, and these  

are part of the total picture.

  This writing is to present, explain, and discuss whatever subject is brought into focus by the 

image(s) you choose to work with.  You are to provide a history or account of the image, a reading of 

its context, purpose, visual form, and impact or significance. The visuals should be carefully 

integrated, described, discussed and/or interpreted in the essay body.  You might choose a favorite 

artist whose work inspires you; an important or news-making artwork or one that simple speaks to 

you in some way; a clever animation or touching short film; a Youtube or other post that has been

getting a lot of attention. You can Google  iconic image or simple follow the link here posted and 

perhaps find an image to stir your imagination and intellectual curiosity. 

You will need a visual, your primary source focus, and one or two other secondary information sources.   We will address any difficulties or questions and try to finish the draft in class.  



Below is an example of a short report from a previous quarter, on the topic of creativity.  At the time no visuals were required but one appears, nonetheless, to illustrate the theme:



On Being Creative
A recent article in the New York Times titled "Learning to Think Outside the Box," by Laura Pappano, reports that college degrees are now being awarded in the study of creativity and that those who earn such degrees, by some accounts, have proved themselves to be creative problem solvers, people who can think outside of the box, which might make them strong candidates in the current job market as certain employers prize creativity.  It may seem awkward to speak of majoring or minoring in creativity per say, that is, separate from any specific field or endeavor, and in fact in several of the courses mentioned the work required appears rather academic, a traditional process requiring study of the literature on creativity and representative individuals, personal observation and self-reflection, analysis of a problem, discovery, and invention:
In Dr. Burnett’s Introduction to Creative Studies survey course, students explore definitions of creativity, characteristics of creative people and strategies to enhance their own creativity. These include rephrasing problems as questions, learning not to instinctively shoot down a new idea (first find three positives), and categorizing problems as needing a solution that requires either action, planning or invention. A key objective is to get students to look around with fresh eyes and be curious. The inventive process, she says, starts with “How might you…”
If the course were Composition 101, similar strategies might be used to enhance student awareness of how good writing gets done.  The centrality of trial and error to all creative endeavour is a key takeaway in creativity studies; one teacher dubbed his course “Failure 101” to emphasize the fact.  Indeed, “his favorite assignment” sounds much like a writing assignment:  “Construct a résumé based on things that didn’t work out and find the meaning and influence these have had on your choices.”  He asks students to connect the dots in their life, and to redefine failure in the context of the larger journey.  Indeed, I believe we accomplish little if we are unwilling to risk failure or to grope our way instinctively through the psychological turmoil and darkness of inexperience, ignorance, and, at times, ineptitude.  But we must till we find our footing, else we risk accomplishing little and losing touch with that which gives life real zest, meeting the challenges life poses. 
Humans are naturally creative, we have had to be in order to survive; our world is increasingly a world of made things and the best of them, utilitarian or artistic, serve to make living easier and richer:  a chair provides comfortable rest, a bowl, fork and spoon practical means of conveying food to our mouths, clothing warmth and protection, and story, poetry, music, film and all the arts ancient and modern, above all, sustenance for our souls.  The more we develop our creative capacities the more potential we have to enhance our lives and those of others.  The old myth is that creative endeavor requires some sort of divine gift or genius, but giftedness may be greatly overrated.  Friedrich Nietzsche wrote in Human, All-Too Human (1878) about the process artists must dedicate themselves to in order to achieve greatness:
Artists have a vested interest in our believing in the flash of revelation, the so-called inspiration . . .[shining] down from heaven as a ray of grace.  In reality, the imagination of the good artist or thinker produces continuously good, mediocre, and bad things, but his judgment, trained and sharpened to a fine point, rejects selects, connects . . . All great artists and thinkers [are] great workers, indefatigable not only in inventing, but also in rejecting, sifting, transforming, ordering.         (qtd. in Shenk)
            One has only to read the history of any great artist to discover the artist’s commitment to a process whereby natural endowments or talents were honed by experience and training and a sense of purpose that outweighed the considerable difficulties of achieving work of great merit. Stephen McCranie, a young commercial cartoonist, writes and illustrates a blog called DoodleAlley  recounting, among other topics,  his creative “issues” in a fresh and clear style, some of which the frame here illustrates.
            At  Youtube, a marvelous addition to the world of made things, one can watch the posts of the ice skating finals at the Sochi Winter Olympics, and marvel at the athletic skill, power, daring, and grace of reigning champion Yuan-Kim and others in faraway Russia, long after the games have ended, or listen to the recordings of artists and thinkers now dead.  Today we have so many sources and models of inspired work we can feel overwhelmed, but the problems and challenges of the 21st century remain and will require news ways of thinking to meet them. It seems to me creativity is part and parcel of surviving and thriving. 
Shenk, David.  The Genius In All Of Us.  New York. Random House, 2011. Print.
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At Slate, there appears an article on the notable work of a quite young photographer who work is published in Olivia BeeKids in Love. Another piece describes an exhibit in Los Angeles that documents the current refugee crisis, the largest in human history, according to the U.N. 
In an older article, the author looks at political cartoons as a rather worn form and praises visuals that pack a "wallop," as for example infographics.


Here is an interesting article on photography, which models a visual presentation followed by discussion of its significance:  http://www.nytimes.com/2015/08/23/magazine/shadows-in-sao-paulo.html?ribbon-ad-idx=17&rref=homepage&module=Ribbon&version=origin&region=Header&action=click&contentCollection=Home%20Page&pgtype=article



Alain de Botton, author and philosopher, started a school in London to teach important things that do not get enough attention in most curriculums.  "The School of Life" posts short animated lessons that are lively, fun, and informative, as for example this one on the importance of children's art: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Gqe1navZYA&list=PLwxNMb28XmpckOvZZ_AZjD7WM2p9-6NBv&index=3

On TED, Rachel Sussman presents her work on the oldest continuously living organisms on earth.


Citing Sources in MLA Style

To document your research sources, whether from an article in print or online, an encyclopedia or dictionary item, an interview source, a film, photograph, illustration or other visual material– there is a standard means.  
       The primary reference is the author of the source, whose last name provides the key or first word to the source item as it is entered on the Works Cited page.  This page contains an alphabetical list of all the sources cited in the report. Any directly quoted, paraphrased or summarized information should be referenced or cited in text and then included on the Works Cited page.   Thus, on this page one finds the full bibliographic or publication information of each source cited in the report/essay. 
        The author’s name and the title of the piece should be included in the essay text along with whatever information item you have borrowed or used.  This in-text reference may appear as a parenthetical citation (i.e. a set of parentheses like the one I am using now) containing the author's last name and perhaps a page number (for print sources typically) or text title.  Sometimes an article or source being used may have no author named; in such instances, use the text title as the key term, the website name, or the most direct means of identifying the source.  Do not put URLs in essay text.

At the following URLs you will find discussion of the MLA guidelines and illustrations for integrating sources:


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    Essay 3/Short Report, draft due today, week 6 (500 words):  Use of references, formatting of quotations, and the avoidance of plagiarism is part of the essay practice.  Learning how to find and use reference sources correctly and purposefully is an essential aspect of writing about subjects beyond your immediate experience and one that requires good reading skills and some measure of critical thinking and judgment.  
   Addressing current events and topics in the media allows you to tap the interest of readers who want to stay current and well-informed, and allows you to enter and shape the discussion as one who is well-informed and has something to add to the discussion, be it only your opinion. Use direct quotation in support of your claims, but don't overload the essay with quotations.  Your voice should be the dominant voice.  Identify the various sources you have used for content by author and/or title of work and tie the source information clearly to the specific content borrowed.  There should be no confusion about which item of information came from where, or whose speech we hear in a passage. The in-text reference information provides the key word or words that will head each entry in the Works Cited list that follows the report. In essay 5, however, I am not requiring a Works Cited list.  

Checklist:
*Make your thesis claim clear and provide adequate evidence to develop and support it
*Acknowledge all material borrowed from source texts.  
* Use quotation marks around all language borrowed word for word
*Provide a clear presentation of the visual artifact(s)
*Identify the author of each source in text or in parentheses following the information item.
*Use the article or website title as a source reference for works without identified authors.
*Review the basic pattern for creating entries on the Works Cited page.



The following URLs explain and demonstrate the ways that quotations of prose and poetry are presented and punctuated, along with whatever citations may be required:  

                               http://www.writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/QPA_quoting.html

                               http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/03/


The Works Cited format is here illustrated for some commonly used sources:

Individual Author of a Book
Hazzard, Shirley.  The Great Fire.  New York.  Farrar, 2003. Print.

Article from a Printed Magazine
Jenkins, Lee.  “He’s Gotta Play Hurt.”  Sports Illustrated. 26 Oct. 2009:  42-3. Print.

Article from an Online Magazine
Bowden, Mark.  “Jihadists in Paradise.”  The Atlantic.com.  Atlantic Monthly Group, Mar. 2007.  Web. 8 Mar. 2007.

Article from an Online Newspaper
Richmond, Riva.  “Five Ways to Keep Online Criminals at Bay.”  New York Times.  New York Times, 19 May 2010.  Web.  29 May 2010.

Selection from an Online Book
Webster, Augusta.  “Not Love.”  A Book of Rhyme.  London, 1881.  Victorian Women Wrtiers Project. Web. 8 Mar. 2007.
  
Organization Web Page
“Library Statistics.”  American Library Association.  Amer. Lib. Assn.  2010 Web. 26 Feb. 2010.

Film
Lord of the Rings:  The Return of the King.  Dir. Peter Jackson.  New Line Cinema, 2003. Film.

Program on Television or Radio
“The Wounded Platoon.”  Frontline.  PBS.  WGBH, Boston, 18 May 2010.  Television.

Online Video Clip
Murphy, Beth.  "Tips for a Good Profile Piece."  Project:  Report. YouTube, 7 Sept. 2008. Web. 19 Sept. 2008.
Advertisement
Feeding America.  Advertisement.  Time.  21 Dec. 2009:  59.  Print.

Comic or Cartoon
Adams, Scott.  “Dilbert.”  Comic Strip.  Denver Post 1 Mar. 2010:  8C. Print.

Personal, Telephone, or E-mail Interview
Boyd, Dierdra.  Personal Interview. 5 Feb. 2012.



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The final draft of your narrative essay (2) is due week 7, at the beginning of class.

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Essay 4 (due week 9, 500 words):  An EyeWitness/Field Report:  You must attend in person a local event, community function, business enterprise, entertainment venue, museum, restaurant or hotel establishment, nature preserve or park, area of historical interest, etcetera– in order to gather information from direct experience.  You cannot rely on the reports of others or the site's own published information alone.  The writing of the piece requires you bring to readers the vicarious experience of being there in person. themselves; that is, by engaging readers in your own experience on the ground.  Background research may help fill out and provide context for the report of course, and you are encouraged to find out as much as you can in the way of origins or history of the establishment, event or area for possible inclusion in the report.  



     Reviews and descriptions of cultural fare–of nature parks, historical attractions, art exhibits and fairs, live music shows, restaurants, bars, and clubs old and new, sporting events, lectures, book signings and discussions, community classes and workshops –serve to inform people of what's going on about town and provide them incentive to get out and experience some of what the area has to offer.     In this assignment you must report on a local place or local event from an eye-witness perspective–you must go there, experience whatever is on offer, and write about it in such a way that readers feel they have gotten to see and know the place through your first-hand experience of it.
     The particular focus and perspective you bring to your subject,   your knowledge and ideas and observations of it, and the degree of interest and engagement with the subject you show–these are central to the essay’s success.  Whether you are visiting a park, a beach, a museum, theater, restaraunt, etcetera–descriptions of the scene or environs, the activity, the individual artworks, performances, ambiance, food, service, etcetera will bring the piece to life and convey a you-are-there sensation to readers.  Your readers will be relying on your knowledge, powers of observation and storytelling abilities.    Your informed judgment, taste, and opinions will be an important element.   approach you create, the thesis idea controlling and unifying the work, will make for certain selections and emphases that reflect you the observer, your history, interests, tastes, etc.  
    The eye-witness report is a species of primary research.  You may find you want background reading on whatever aspects of your subject require context, to fully develop your thesis or main ideas.  To repeat, this essay will require you actually go somewhere in person and record material facts and observations before putting the piece together.  Your thesis tells you what to include, to emphasize, and what to ignore.  The essay should run a minimum of 5oo-6oo words, including introductory, body, and closing paragraphs, and title.

          Remember the who, what, where, when, why roster of specifics.

If you were to visit an exhibit, you would include the museum name, location, and featured artist(s), including the exhibit’s run dates.  

Focus would necessarily be on some theme observed in one or more works or overall.  You would identify representative works (by title) and present a verbal description–medium, size, subject, form, and color–so that readers can "see" the work and understand the conclusions you draw from it.  If you were to visit a natural area, you might tie the visit in to some current news (a news "hook") or ongoing area of interest (natural history/studies, ecology, environmental justice, marine life, art) to create audience appeal, to lend purpose and weight to the piece.  Food culture is of great interest to many these days and offers many choices for primary research or "eye-witness" reports–green markets, restaraunts, bars, etcetera.

If you go to a museum the primary focus would be to see the various exhibits and selectively cover what you find most interesting.  The URL of the NSU Museum of Art on Las Olas:  http://nsuartmuseum.org  
In fact, there are several museums in the downtown area, including  The Old Ft. Lauderdale 

Historical Museum and another devoted to science and discovery.


     The field report (#4), 500- 700 words, will be due week 9.  Those of you still to present an essay reading may do so then. 

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Essay 5:  You must identify and  explore a subject or idea for a short research report.   The topic is yours to choose.  Locate reading material relevant to whatever line of inquiry you intend and begin developing the work.  In this essay of 600 words you put across a claim made persuasive and credible by virtue of supporting facts, expert opinion, testimonials, logical inquiry, visuals, and, perhaps, emotional appeals to the reader's values.  A film field trip and subsequent review could be used for this report.

Monday, May 2, 2016

Week 5












     Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.   – Mark Twain


Good day!  Hope you are well.

Today we will pick up where we left off last week. We'll read some of the rough drafts of autobiographical narratives (#2), at least several presentations, as last week we did not.   The revised final draft is due Week 7; next week I will have returned all graded copies of the rough draft.

There is to be a short writing for homework points done in class today.  I will provide the text, a poem, and require you focus on the narrative elements, using direct quotation as you present some of the key features and comment on theme(s).



Assignment #3 is to be a short report on a topic or story of current or perennial interest, however deep the history of it.  It is to be anchored by an image that you will introduce and describe in the course of your report.

Take the image below, for instance:  what do you see depicted and what meaning do you take from it?




The illustration above of an American flag, its stars falling from the field of blue, accompanied a feature report in the New York Times Magazine about efforts over the last fifty years since the Voting Rights Act of 1965 was passed to actually undo the protections the act put in place.  It drew a response from President Barack Obama (see here). A similar image accompanied the feature piece and is reproduced below.  The flag's stripes are unraveling, tangled.  Clearly the symbolic unity and order the flag symbolizes is in disarray:





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We experience the world through our senses and mind. Color, shape, sound, scent, texture, taste, composition and words play endlessly in our perceptual fields.  Think of the images that culture produces–photographs, films, commercials, drawings, paintings, cartoons, logos, graphics, etcetera.  What can one learn from visual representations?  Can one analyze the particular messages or meaning conveyed, interpret the story told, point or theme illustrated?  Indeed, whether we want to understand the documentary value or aesthetic appeal, or the social, political, or economic interests and attitudes that an image represents, close study can be fun and insightful.

How do advertisers get us to buy?  What makes a particular photograph resonate?  What storylines or themes implicit in images make us pause?  How to begin identifying or “reading” the source content?
The following guidelines should help you write cogently about visual representations:

Source, Purpose, Audience
*Identify the context of the image(s) or video; that is where and how it has been published and distributed or exhibited.  To what end or purpose was it created, and by whom?
*What audience does the image address or appeal to?  How so?
*What is the most prominent element or figure in the image?  And the primary focal point? 

Objects, Figures, Story
*Identify the important objects and figures of foreground and background, consider the literal and expressive details of each, and their collective arrangement in the composition. 
*What story or event is depicted or implied?
*What mood or emotion or idea(s) are put in motion by the use of light and dark, color, balance or lack thereof, the use of white space, graphic text or other elements, etcetera?

Take Away Meaning
*To the extent the image persuades by feeling, mood, dramatic content, and so on, what is to be learned?
What do the uses of the image suggest about culture, politics, social life, art, history, the human condition?


Essay 3: We will be writing about a single image, film or video clip, and its bearing on the larger issue(s) to which it speaks.  On your own or as a group then, we will focus on the written presentation of visual imagery, subjects yet to be decided.  Museum or gallery art works would of course make for ideal practice. An iconic image of whatever medium, one of those culturally embedded, instantly recognizable examples would make an excellent choice.  You could simply google search "iconic images," limiting the search by era, if you choose, and browse the selection. You could simply run through the inventory of important images you have stored in your head and that continue to speak to you in important ways, and to others, too, presumably.  You want to make a connection with the reader and be as informative as you can in your description of the image and discussion of its historical/cultural significance, and personal, in so far as applicable.  You are to find recent (published within the last several years) articles that provide cultural context and/or news and commentary to help you present the image effectively. Include two source references in the essay.

Some options we will consider are listed below.   Keep track of titles, authors, photographers, and posting sites so that MLA documentation can be completed.


(1)  The following URL affords a fairly extensive photo archive that we can use for class practice in presenting and interpreting visual images.  You will choose one image for a short work of 350-500 words that describes the image and the idea(s) it serves to illustrate or the questions to which it gives rise, whether social, historical, political, philosophical, aesthetic, technological, existential . . . .  You must have a point to make in addressing the image and support that point by means of reference to the image.  You do not have to be an expert on the subject the image addresses or implies, but you should be able to identify something about its impact and merits to make an interesting short essay.

(2)  Some online periodicals provide a fairly large number of the work of cartoonists, who offer perspectives on matters making the news, in politics, sports, environment, etc.  Choose one from the daily offering or the archives, describe the image and any accompanying text, the artist or author, and the story, matter, or issue it addresses.  You can google key words associated with the pictured material, and find recent news reports that may enhance your understanding of what is being depicted.  Humor is typically an important element in cartoon work and you may have fun presenting readers the material.  Avoid selecting any piece you do not get.  350-500 words, titled, double-spaced lines.
One site:

(3) Slide shows of various topics abound online.  A recent one at the New York Times showcases the garden features associated with the artist Frida Kahlo:  http://www.nytimes.com/2015/05/22/arts/design/in-frida-kahlo-art-garden-life-nature-melds-with-the-artist-herself.html

(4) A google search of "iconic images" brings up an array of often instantly recognizable images that speak to our collective history, the people admired, hated and/or celebrated, the watershed events, etcetera.

(5) Travel features and slide shows have perennial appeal to those of us who would be travelers:  http://travel.nationalgeographic.com/travel/best-of-travel-365/january-2015/#/south-island-new-zealand_87640_990x742.jpg


You should include references to authors and the image source in text and at the bottom of the piece in the MLA format.

*  The world of images obviously exceeds the postings above, and if you have some alternative image example, you may elect to work with it.  
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Note:  Provide the work cited item in MLA format at the foot of the paper.  Use the format shown at the bottom of today's post for an individual author of an article posted on the

Internet.


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Below is an example of one quarter's short report assignment.  It begins with an article about a cat that made a 200-mile journey home after getting lost, and proceeds to integrate other cat news/reports then current. The report did not require use of an anchoring image, though there were many that might have served, if only to embellish, including the one of my cat Ruby, posted below.

  


Sample Cat Report (Essay 3):

Cats on the Loose:  A Problem in Need of a Solution

For all the cat lovers who read the article by Pam Belluck titled “A Cat’s 200-Mile Trek Leaves Scientists Guessing” (New York Times January 19, 2013) it is perhaps comforting to learn that domestic cats have an as yet little-understood ability to navigate home over long distances.  Holly, a four-year-old house cat, got lost on a family outing to Daytona Beach, Fla., and over the next two months walked to within a mile of her owner’s home in West Palm Beach, Fla.  Fortunately, she was wearing a microchip that allowed rescuers to reunite her with her owners.  Holly’s thinness and bleeding paws attested to the hardships of her journey and that she was lucky to survive. Scientists do not know how cats navigate over long distances.  Writes Belluck, “There is in fact little scientific dogma on cat navigation. Migratory animals like birds, turtles and insects have been studied more closely, and use magnetic fields, olfactory cues, or orientation by the sun.” 
But in other, less heart-warming reports, we have a joint study by the University of Georgia and National Geographic Society called Kitty Cams that confirms that cats given the freedom to roam often expose themselves to significant harm and pose significant threats to small mammals, reptiles, and birds living in the wild.  The Kitty Cams study estimates that domestic cats may kill as many as half a billion birds or more and several billion small mammals each year.  Another report by scientists with the Smithsonian Conservation Biology Institute raised alarms worldwide in contending that “un-owned and owned free-ranging domestic cats kill between 1.4 and 3.7 billion birds and between 6.9 and 20.7 billion small mammals each year in the contiguous United States” (“Feral and Free-Ranging Pet Cats Kill Far More Birds in the Continental United States Than Previously Believed, Smithsonian Study Finds”).  The study indicates, moreover, that “it is un-owned cats—such as farm and barn cats, strays, colony cats, and feral cats—that cause the majority of the mortality, roughly 69 percent of bird deaths and 89 percent of mammal deaths.”  Scientists have concluded that cats represent a greater mortality threat to wild birds, whose numbers are declining, than other threats often cited such as environmental toxins, bridges, skyscrapers, and towers.
The reports of cat predation are being challenged by cat welfare advocates who see a threat to feral cat populations (Alley Cat Allies “Tell the Smithsonian: Stop Spreading Junk Science That Will Kill Cats!”).  Neuter and spay programs have been very effective at reducing the number of stray and feral cats, and the number of cats being euthanized, but the population problem persists.  The large numbers of colonies of feral cats, even those fed and cared for by volunteers, pose a risk to wildlife that many authorities see as untenable.  Debate centers on how to effectively reduce the number of stray and feral cats and thus conserve and protect important wildlife species (Mott “U.S. Faces Growing Feral Cat Problem”).
            As the owner of a cat that relishes the hunt, and succeeds far too often, I have concluded that my Ruby, an ordinary black short-haired domestic cat, will have to stay indoors far more often than she would like, for her own safety and that of the wild creatures that live in or visit my neighborhood.

Note:  The report above does not include a Works Cited list, but it has the in-text references that provide readers the key terms (author and article title) that would be used in a Works Cited page list. The specific reference information and the order in which it is to be formatted is illustrated in the set of MLA examples below. 



Essay short report: The topic must be one which you can tie to the photo or image. The idea is to expand on a subject by reviewing related topical material.  A requirement is that you use at least one image and one article or text source (not Wikipedia) as source material and carry a point by means of it.   Along the way, you will introduce each source, describe its main contents or contribution to your essay and thesis, summarizing the findings, and provide some direct quotation; again, your source should contribute to the development  and support the thesis of the essay.  You will have some time to complete the assignment in class week 6.  

Possible Topics (fill in the blanks):
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Type the key words combined with plus signs into the search engine (I use Google) and see what news or reports appear.  The Huffington Post, The New York Times, Christian Science Monitor, NPR.org, and many other sites regularly publish news on every topic you would find in the New York Times.


Format Elements:  The source title and author, be it an article or essay in a magazine or newspaper or that of a website from which you summarize or borrow material, should be identified at the outset in your introduction or first use of the material. The year or date of such information should be recent, or otherwise noted.  Use brackets [ ] around any material you add for the sake of clarity or any necessary change to the original, such as a verb tense, a pronoun, or an ellipsis (to abbreviate the length of the passage). 

Reference to the particular source material by title and author and the purposeful use of direct quotation where warranted are requirements.  We will practice referencing and quoting from various textual sources as needed.  The following list gives examples of suitable taglines to introduce quotations:

Deani writes, . . .

As Dean says,

According to another authority, author of . . .

Makari, the author of "In the Arcadian Woods," suggests a different view, claiming . . .

*Note:  Plagiarism is theft of another's work, whether inadvertent or not.  The following is one textbook example of plagiarism (The Brief Bedford Reader, 9th ed.) :

Original passage:  If we are collectively judged by how we treat immigrants–those who appear to be 'other' but will in a generation be 'us'–we are not in very good shape.

Paraphrase (plagiarised):  The author argues that if we are judged as a group by how we treat immigrants–those who seem to different but eventually will be the same–we are in bad shape.

A paraphrase or summary must express the original freshly; it is not enough to make superficial changes to the wording here and there.  Moreover, the syntax–sentence structure– should not mirror the original.

The following URL illustrates the ways that quotations are presented and punctuated, along with whatever citations may be required:  http://www.writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/QPA_quoting.html

   
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 Homework Essay 3 (see extended research notes and guidelines below):  Pull together an essay  that focuses on one or more of the topics or issues raised by the image (s).  Use the author's embedded links and/or Google to search the topic for related pieces.  The materials you find in your research may all be written sources, but include one mulitmedia, photo,  film, or illustration that address in some way the topic of your piece. You should identify all sources used clearly, and in the context of their specific use or appearance in your text. Direct quotation is also a requirement.  Observe the 20 percent rule:  no more than 20 percent of the length of the essay should appear as direct quotation.  You must have a ruling point, a thesis, which is the conclusion that you have come to about the matter, and one which others might reasonalby disgree with. A thesis is a matter of considered judgment and opinion.

This is to be a 450-500 word essay, titled and double-spaced.  Bring to class source material and a nearly finished rough draft next week, week 6.

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 Research/Short Reports

    Research begins with a subject focus and proceeds by study of the sources that shed light on the subject. Research sources are typically categorized as primary or secondary.  The following URL provides a description of the distinctions made between the two:  http://www.yale.edu/collections_collaborative/primarysources/primarysources.html

  Those sources that help the writer to "prove" or advance the thesis point are essential.  You as author must become something of an expert in your particular line of inquiry by studying your sources. Whatever the purpose and scope of your essay or report, you will draw upon the "truths" of your sources to help you make your point(s).

Turn to Pappano's piece about academic courses in creativity.  Why was it written?  In what context(s) must it be understood?  To what issues does it speak, what human interests and concerns?  What further research might Pappano's report invite?   We will discuss in class the context of the report's publication and its topical links.  Essay assignment #4 is to be a short essay that synthesizes material from several different source articles or artifacts that are topically linked to the Healy piece.

In research reports, each source must be clearly referenced in text by title and author or publication site if no author is named.  The Modern Language Association publishes guidelines for writing in the humanities which we will follow. These include what are called in-text citations and a Works Cited list.  We will look at the format further in weeks to come, but for now let me make a few points about the business of gathering information, which, naturally, is how we become informed.

Whatever the topic– literary, political, environmental, economic–our first understandings often arise through personal experience and/or casual exposure.   We may have learned something of WWII from our grandparents, who lived through it and have told us stories, for example.  We may have served in the military and thus have direct insight into the impact of war on individuals and society.  We may have read novels, histories, watched documentary films, or listened to the testimonials of those who have born witness to war.  We may read the daily news reports of wars near and far.  We may have visited the great battlefields of Gettysburg or elsewhere.  And we may have formed certain conclusions, however tentative, about the nature of war and its historical use by governments in pursuit of whatever aims. So we may have a store of experience and information that informs our attitudes.  Yet we may never have put together an essay that provides the telling examples, personal voices, eye witness accounts, and expert opinions that provide the persuasive account of why we feel as we do. In fact we may never have gathered it all together for synthesis and analysis.  But that's what we do when we research a matter or issue.

We may use dictionaries to help us define words and terms that may be unfamiliar, encyclopedias to get  concise facts and history, and the news media to learn of events large and small and the range of popular and expert opinion on a given matter.   We may include the artists whose works give us imaginative insight, and the personal stories that come to us by so many means.  What have the many who have weighed in on any subject had to say?   Expository essays are built on writing that is informative, based on the most credible and recent information, with the express purpose of conveying  to readers a clear understanding of the issue or matter. There may be a personal story or basis to the writing, but reference to the work or ideas of others is necessary, in the form of description, summary,  paraphrase and direct quotation, synthesis, and logical analysis. You as author control the material and remain the dominant voice throughout.  It is your thesis idea, your conclusion that unifies and drives the development and choice of sources used in support.
        An essay on some aspect of culture and society today, for example, would necessarily be informed by the writer's particular knowledge of the subject, which comes from familiarity with the literature and artifacts of that aspect of culture and society.  You might, for example, watch a film ( a primary source), and then record your responses, questions that arise, evaluations of the actors, the plot, script, cinematography, etcetera.  You read everything you can find about the making of this film.   You review what has been written or broadcast by others about the film (secondary sources).  Finally, you write a piece that incorporates important aspects of the film's creation, aspects of its cultural importance, the critical responses of film experts or credible reviewers, and of course your own thoughts and conclusions on whatever you have deemed the most important focus in writing about the film. 
    Addressing current events and topics in the media allows you to tap the interest of readers who want to stay current and well-informed, and allows you to enter and shape the discussion as one who is well-informed and has something to add to the discussion, be it only your opinion. It is critical that you identify the various sources you have used for content by author and/or title of work and that the source information be tied to the content borrowed. 

-------------- Essay work should always advance a point, that is, a thesis, always an arguable claim, and one that tries to convince readers of the truth or soundness of some position,  or perhaps to do something, take a stand, too.  Essayists may explore a topic so that readers are in a position to make an informed decision, without themselves insisting on a single position or interpretation of events. The thesis may address an issue that has no ready or absolute answer, nor one readily verified by resort to factual report, but one that must be grappled with and that challenges readers to define their values and beliefs.

Argument or fact?  Facts do not stand alone.  They are put to use, interpreted, sometimes misinterpreted.  Which of the following statements convey matters of fact?  Which are claims, opinions?

     *Recent severe weather events have been caused by climate change.
     *Water boils at 212 degrees Fahrenheit.
     *Van Gogh’s work is that of a madman.
     *Plastic bags are polluting the seas.
     *Consumers must reduce their carbon footprint.
     *The average temperature of the earth has risen over the last century.
     *Glaciers are melting at a rate unprecedented in modern times.
     *Climate change is a dire threat to the existence of life as we know it.
     *The existence of God is a myth.

 The argument is to be built around an arguable claim, that is one about which reasonable people could reasonably disagree.  It should be supported with reference to your readings, expert or authoritative findings, factual support and logical analysis.  First-person experience and appeals to common sense and human values count, too. 

Consider the following thesis:  The use of plastics worldwide must come under closer scrutiny and regulation.

   Readers may now want to know why, and how the issue affects them and, indeed, if there is anything they might do to help resolve the issue. Your sources provide background information, demonstrate your knowledge of the topic, provide authoritative support and perspective, and show the range of perspectives possible, in fairness to differing opinions.

  Our ideas, whether commonly held or no, are rooted in traditional areas of study reflecting the history of human thought, values, attitudes, and tastes, and conduct.  These study areas include philosophy, religion, nature, aesthetics, science, ethics, education, etcetera.  Our most closely held beliefs and attitudes reflect very often our unexamined ideas about the nature of love, faith, trust, loss, betrayal, goodness and evil, freedom, sanctity, the very meaning of life.  Whether we focus on Washington and the shenanigans that make the nightly news, bioengineering, Facebook, legal injustices, or the most recent individual or "hero" making  a positive difference in the world, our beliefs, associated ideas, and feelings define us as human beings.  In choosing a research topic you will tap into some subject about which you feel strongly and have clear enough knowledge to put across a cogent argument or position, as supported also by fact and opinion gathered from your reading of available literature.  


*Select material for quotation on the following bases:
1       -the wording is particularly memorable, to the point, and not easily paraphrased
2       -it expresses an author’s or expert’s direct opinion that you want to emphasize
3       -it provides example of the range of perspective
4       -it provides a constrasting or opposing view

*See http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/675/1/ for MLA formatting rules and examples of direct quotation.   The OWL site offers fairly comprehensive discussion and examples of presenting and documentaing primary and secondary source material.

*See https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/596/1/ for use of appositives and how to punctuate them with commas.


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Citing Sources in MLA Style

To document your research sources, whether from an article in print or online, an encyclopedia or dictionary item, an interview source, a film, photograph, illustration or other visual material– there is a standard means.  The primary reference is the author of the source, whose last name provides the key or first word to the source item as it is entered on the Works Cited page.  This page contains an alphabetical list of all the sources cited in the report. Any directly quoted, paraphrased or summarized information should be referenced or cited in text and then included on the Works Cited page.   Thus, on this page one finds the full bibliographic or publication information of each source cited in the report/essay.  The author’s name and the title of the piece should be included in the essay text along with whatever information item you have borrowed or used.  This in-text reference may appear as a parenthetical citation (i.e. a set of parentheses like the one I am using now) containing the author's last name and perhaps a page number or text title.  Sometimes an article or source being used may have no author credit; in such instances, use the text title as the key term or the website page name. 

The following URL displays the MLA guidelines and illustrations for integrating sources:
Checklist:
*Double-check to that you have acknowledged all material from a source.
*Identify the author of each source in text or in parentheses following the information item.
*Use the title as a source reference for works without identified authors.
*Follow the basic pattern for creating entries on the Works Cited page, and be sure to alphabetize them.

The Works Cited format is here illustrated for some commonly used sources:

Individual Author of a Book
Hazzard, Shirley.  The Great Fire.  New York.  Farrar, 2003. Print.

Article from a Printed Magazine
Jenkins, Lee.  “He’s Gotta Play Hurt.”  Sports Illustrated. 26 Oct. 2009:  42-3. Print.

Article from an Online Magazine
Bowden, Mark.  “Jihadists in Paradise.”  The Atlantic.com.  Atlantic Monthly Group, Mar. 2007.  Web. 8 Mar. 2007.

Article from an Online Newspaper
Richmond, Riva.  “Five Ways to Keep Online Criminals at Bay.”  New York Times.  New York Times, 19 May 2010.  Web.  29 May 2010.

Selection from an Online Book
Webster, Augusta.  “Not Love.”  A Book of Rhyme.  London, 1881.  Victorian Women Wrtiers Project. Web. 8 Mar. 2007.
  
Organization Web Page
“Library Statistics.”  American Library Association.  Amer. Lib. Assn.  2010 Web. 26 Feb. 2010.

Film
Lord of the Rings:  The Return of the King.  Dir. Peter Jackson.  New Line Cinema, 2003. Film.

Program on Television or Radio
“The Wounded Platoon.”  Frontline.  PBS.  WGBH, Boston, 18 May 2010.  Television.

Online Video Clip
Murphy, Beth.  "Tips for a Good Profile Piece."  Project:  Report. YouTube, 7 Sept. 2008. Web. 19 Sept. 2008.
Advertisement
Feeding America.  Advertisement.  Time.  21 Dec. 2009:  59.  Print.

Comic or Cartoon
Adams, Scott.  “Dilbert.”  Comic Strip.  Denver Post 1 Mar. 2010:  8C. Print.

Personal, Telephone, or E-mail Interview
Boyd, Dierdra.  Personal Interview. 5 Feb. 2012.



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*Field Report:  The field report must be done on your own, and requires you report from an eye witness perspective on some event, natural feature, business and so on that is part of our local community–Monroe, Dade, Collier, Broward, or Palm Beach County.  We will discuss it further next week and I'll provide examples.